tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420232243325731677.post9068635900075740082..comments2012-11-28T11:37:43.483-06:00Comments on Amy Archer EDM 310 Blog : Blog Post 4 Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14984545382321888164noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420232243325731677.post-192393896586192782012-09-27T23:29:44.204-05:002012-09-27T23:29:44.204-05:00Amy,
I really enjoyed reading your blog post. You...Amy,<br /><br />I really enjoyed reading your blog post. You stayed on topic, and your blog post as a whole really glowed together well. There were a few mistakes that I did see while reading.<br /><br />1. "The students got really into the assignment."<br />That should be re-written as "The students really got into the assignment."<br /><br />2. In your picture, make sure that you use the ALT and TITLE modifications properly. Your source for the picture is supposed to be seen only when you hover your mouse across the picture.<br /><br />3. The assignment was late. Even though it was only a minute after the due date, it was still late. Dr. Strange stresses how important it is to be on time with assignments. Just be sure to watch your time with assignments to ensure that they are posted on time.<br /><br />Other than that, everything else seemed to be written well. Keep up the good work!!<br /><br />Ashley ZaworskiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11972699646684463202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8420232243325731677.post-24062445059773202952012-09-25T09:03:12.320-05:002012-09-25T09:03:12.320-05:00"I believe that if we had the opportunity to ..."I believe that if we had the opportunity to Garage Band of a Smart Board.. " Maybe you mean use Garage band and/or a Smart Board..." I agree with your sentiment.<br /><br />"...I would have carried what I learned with me through the years." Without practice, no. But you can relearn at a more rapid rate than others.<br /><br />"How will you use podcast in your classroom one day?<br /><br />Do you think podcast can make a difference in the classroom?" Who are these questions for? Why are they in your post (at the end) like this? Not clear. If they are for the reader of your blog you need to make that clear.<br /><br />Maybe just before them put: Now, dear reader of my blog, let me ask <i>you</i> two questions:<br /><br />You need to make podcast plural (podcasts) in the first question. And I would not leave so much space between them.<br /><br />Or, these may be questions you intended to answer but did not. I don't know.<br /><br />Thoughtful. Imaginative.<br /><br />John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com